第二周:练习
练习说明
练习方式:中译英 或 改写,二选一。
步骤:先自己写 → 对照批改找差距 → 重点看标红错误和正确写法。
补充论据:There is plenty of evidence…
句型模板
There is plenty of evidence showing/illustrating/demonstrating that + 完整句子练习 1:中译英
题目
有大量证据表明,过度使用社交媒体会导致青少年焦虑。
参考主题词
overuse of social media, anxiety, teenagers, plenty of evidence
你的答案
There is plenty of evidence demonstrating that the overuse of social meida makes teenager more anxious.正确写法
There is plenty of evidence showing that the overuse of social media leads to anxiety among teenagers.批改反馈
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meida拼写错误 →media- ❌
makes teenager more anxious→leads to anxiety among teenagers(teenager可数名词单数不能裸用,要么用a或the限定住,一般加复数,表示一部分人;“导致焦虑”用lead to anxiety更书面)- ⚠️
demonstrating语法没错,但模板更常用showing
为什么
lead to + 名词表”导致”,比make sb + 形容词更正式;among teenagers点明群体。
练习 2:改写
题目
普通句:AI is becoming more and more advanced.
改写:用
There is plenty of evidence showing that...结构。
你的答案
There is plenty of evidence convincing that AI is becoming more and more advanced including ………….正确写法
There is plenty of evidence illustrating that AI is becoming more and more advanced.批改反馈
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convincing搭配错误 →showing / illustrating / demonstrating(convince是”使某人信服”,搭配convince sb that,不能直接convincing that)- ❌
including …………多余 → 句子已完整,删掉including或补全具体内容
为什么
convince(动词)= 使信服,必须带对象:convince sb of sth / that...。模板里evidence后接showing/illustrating that表”表明”,主语是”证据”自己在说明,不需要”说服谁”。
提出论点:…but the real prize is…
句型模板
Sth is certainly useful, but the real prize is that + 完整句子练习 1:中译英
题目
阅读当然有用,但真正的收获是它能改变我们的思维方式。
参考主题词
reading, certainly useful, the real prize, change the way we think
你的答案
Reading book is certainly useul, but the real prize is that it could change our mind of thinking(感觉有点奇怪的搭配). 正确写法
Reading is certainly useful, but the real prize is that it can change the way we think.批改反馈
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Reading book→Reading(泛指”阅读”不加 book;要加就用复数Reading books)- ❌
useul拼写错误 →useful- ❌
change our mind of thinking→change the way we think(你的直觉对了,这搭配确实奇怪)- ⚠️
could→can(陈述客观事实用 can)
关于"感觉有点奇怪的搭配"
你的语感是对的。
mind of thinking是中式直译(“思维的大脑”),英文不这么说。“思维方式”的地道表达是the way we think或our mindset。change one's mind是固定短语,但意思是”改变主意/想法”,不是”改变思维方式”。
练习 2:改写
题目
普通句:Computers are useful in many aspects. AI is becoming popular.
改写:用
...is certainly useful, but the real prize is that...连接两句。
你的答案
Computers are certainly useful in many aspects, but the real prize is that AI is becoming popular.正确写法
Computers are certainly useful in many aspects, but the real prize is that AI is becoming more and more popular.批改反馈
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becoming popular→becoming more and more popular(原句是 “more and more advanced”,改写要保留”越来越……”的递进感)- ✅ 句型结构
...is certainly useful, but the real prize is that...套用正确
为什么
the real prize is that...后面接的是”真正的亮点/收获”,用more and more强调趋势递进,比单纯becoming popular更有力度。
背景句:…are bound to arise
句型模板
With so many ..., many problems are bound to arise.练习 1:中译英
题目
由于如此多的家长对孩子的学习压力一无所知,许多身心健康问题必然会产生。
参考主题词
parents, pressure in study, physical and mental problems, bound to arise
你的答案
With so many parents are ignorant of their childs' learing presure, many physical and mental health problems are bound to arise.正确写法
With so many parents knowing nothing about their child's pressure in study, many physical and mental problems are bound to arise.批改反馈
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With so many parents are ignorant→With so many parents knowing nothing about(with复合结构 =with + 名词 + 非谓语,不能再加谓语are)- ❌
childs'→child's(child复数是children,没有childs;这里用单数child's或children's)- ❌
learing拼写错误 →learning- ❌
presure拼写错误 →pressure- ⚠️
physical and mental health problems→physical and mental problems(health可省)
为什么
with复合结构(独立主格):with + 名词 + doing/done/形容词/介词短语,名词后的成分是非谓语,绝不能出现are/is这类谓语动词。这是你本周最高频的错误,务必记住。
练习 2:改写
题目
普通句:Many people move to cities. Traffic problems happen.
改写:用
With so many..., ... are bound to arise结构。
你的答案
With so many people move to cityis, many traffic problems are bound to be arise.正确写法
With so many people moving to cities, many traffic problems are bound to arise.批改反馈
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people move→people moving(with复合结构用非谓语moving,不能用谓语move)- ❌
cityis拼写错误 →cities- ❌
are bound to be arise→are bound to arise(bound to + 动词原形,不加be;arise是不及物动词,没有被动)
为什么
又是
with复合结构:with + people + moving(主动用 doing)。be bound to do是固定搭配”必然……”,to后直接接动词原形。arise(出现/产生)是不及物动词,没有被动语态。
总起句:For anyone who may doubt…
句型模板
For anyone who may doubt ..., ... provides strong evidence that ...练习 1:中译英
题目
对于任何可能怀疑运动好处的人,这项研究提供了强有力的证据,证明运动能改善健康。
参考主题词
exercise, benefits, provide strong evidence, anyone who doubt, improve health
你的答案
For anyone who may doubt the good that sports will do, this search provides strong evidence that sports could improve health level. 正确写法
For anyone who may doubt the benefits of exercise, this research provides strong evidence that it improves health.批改反馈
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the good that sports will do→the benefits of exercise(“好处”用benefits;“运动”正式表达用exercise)- ❌
search→research(search是”搜索/搜寻”,research才是”研究”)- ❌
sports could improve health level→it improves health(it指代 exercise;health level冗余,直接health)- ⚠️
sports→exercise(泛指体育锻炼用exercise,sports偏”体育项目/竞技”)
为什么
search(动词/名词)= 搜索、寻找;research(名词/动词)= 学术研究。一字之差意思完全不同,这是高频易混词。benefits of exercise是”运动的好处”的标准搭配。
练习 2:改写
题目
普通句:Some people doubt advanced technologies. They changed many people’s lives.
改写:用
For anyone who may doubt..., ... provides strong evidence that...结构。
你的答案
For some people who doubt the advanced technologies, the fact they changed many prople's lives provides strong evidence that 正确写法
For anyone who may doubt the ability of advanced technologies, this provides strong evidence showing that they changed many people's lives.批改反馈
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For some people who doubt→For anyone who may doubt(模板固定用anyone who may doubt,语气更正式)- ❌ 主语用错:模板主语应是”研究/事实”(
this/research),你把the fact当主语,结构乱了- ❌
the fact they changed→the fact that they changed(同位语从句缺that)- ❌
prople's拼写错误 →people's- ❌ 句子未完成,
that后面缺内容
为什么
模板结构是
For anyone who may doubt X, Y provides strong evidence that Z:For...是状语,主句主语Y(这项研究/这个事实)才是”提供证据”的主体。你把”事实”塞进了主语位置,导致provides的主语和that从句打架。
背景+观点:Among the facts is that…
句型模板
Among the facts that have emerged about ... is that + 完整句子练习 1:中译英
题目
在关于信息技术的事实中,这些先进技术正在改变人们的生活是其中之一。
参考主题词
information technologies, advanced technologies, great changes, people’s lives
你的答案
Among the facts that have emerged about information technologies is that advanced technology are changing peoples' lives.正确写法
Among the facts that have emerged about information technologies is that these advanced technologies are making great changes to people's lives.批改反馈
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advanced technology are→these advanced technologies are(主谓一致:technology单数配is,technologies复数才配are)- ❌
peoples'→people's(people本身就是复数,所有格是people's,没有peoples')- ⚠️
changing people's lives→making great changes to people's lives(题目强调”改变”,用make great changes更贴合)
为什么
people是集合名词,本身表复数(人们),所有格直接加's→people's。peoples只在表”多个民族”时才用,这里不需要。主谓一致是考研写作扣分重灾区,写完务必检查主语单复数和谓语是否匹配。
练习 2:改写
题目
普通句:I love you. This is a fact about me.
改写:用
Among many facts about ... is that ...倒装结构。
你的答案
Among many facts that have emerged about me is that I love you.正确写法
Among many facts about me is that I love you.批改反馈
- ✅ 倒装结构
Among many facts about... is that...套用正确- ⚠️
that have emerged可省略 → 原句简单,不需要”已经浮现的”这层修饰,Among many facts about me更简洁
为什么
这是 完全倒装:表语
Among many facts about me提前,主语是后面的that I love you从句,谓语is放在主语前。原句没有”逐渐显现”的含义,加that have emerged反而累赘。
过渡句:…in its early stages…
句型模板
A is in its early stages, but is already full of B.练习 1:中译英
题目
寻找合适工作的竞赛才刚刚开始,但对年轻人来说已经充满了障碍。
参考主题词
find an appropriate job, early stages, full of obstacles, the young
你的答案
The race of finding proper occupying(写job是不是更地道一点) is in its early stages, but is already full of obstacle for young man.正确写法
The race to find an appropriate job is in its early stages, but is already full of obstacles for the young.批改反馈
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The race of finding→The race to find(race后接to do表目的,不接of doing)- ❌
proper occupying→an appropriate job(occupying是动名词”占用/占领”,不是”职业”;职业 =job/occupation)- ❌
obstacle→obstacles(“充满障碍”用复数)- ❌
young man→the young(泛指”年轻人”用the young;young man是”一个年轻男子”)
关于"写 job 是不是更地道"
你的判断完全正确,就该写
job。occupy(动词)= 占用、占领(空间/职位),它的动名词occupying不是”找工作”。“职业”的名词是occupation(正式)或job(通用)。另外the + 形容词表一类人:the young(年轻人)、the old(老人)、the rich(富人)。
练习 2:改写
题目
普通句:Self-driving cars are new. There are many challenges.
改写:用
The race to... is in its early stages, but is already full of...结构。
你的答案
The race in self-driving cars is in its early stages, but is already full of challenges.正确写法
The race to dominate the field of self-driving cars is in its early stages, but is already full of intrigue.批改反馈
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The race in self-driving cars→The race to dominate the field of self-driving cars(race后接to do表”做某事的竞赛”;“在自动驾驶领域”要补出the field of)- ⚠️
challenges可以,但原答案用intrigue(复杂局面/暗斗)更生动- ✅ 后半句
is in its early stages, but is already full of...结构正确
为什么
the race to do sth是固定搭配,表”争相做某事”。光写race in self-driving cars意思含糊(“在自动驾驶车里的比赛”?),补出to dominate the field of(争夺……领域的主导权)才完整。
观点句:The very fact comes at…
句型模板
The very fact of/that A comes at a bad/good time when ...练习 1:中译英
题目
学生能从AI中获益巨大这件事来得正是时候,因为当今的先进技术为他们获取各种知识提供了便利。
参考主题词
students, take great advantages from AI, good time, advanced technologies, convenient access, acquire knowledge
你的答案
The very fact of students gaining lots of profits from AI comes at a good time when the advanced technique afford convenience for getting all kinds of knowledge.正确写法
The very fact that students would take great advantages from AI comes at a good time when the advanced technologies nowadays could provide convenient access for them to acquire all sorts of knowledge.批改反馈
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The very fact of students gaining→The very fact that students would take(模板用The very fact that + 完整句子,不用of doing)- ❌
lots of profits→great advantages(profit是”利润/盈利”,“获益”用advantages/benefits)- ❌
technique→technologies(technique是”技巧/手法”,technology才是”科技/技术”)- ❌
afford convenience for getting→provide convenient access for them to acquire(afford多指”买得起”,“提供便利”用provide convenient access)- ⚠️ 主谓一致:
technique afford→technologies provide
为什么
technique(技巧、技法,如绘画技巧)vstechnology(科学技术)——这是考研高频易混词。profit(利润,商业语境)vsbenefit/advantage(好处、益处)。The very fact that + 句子中that引导同位语从句,解释 fact 的具体内容。
练习 2:改写
题目
普通句:The lawsuit is bad for Uber. Uber has culture problems.
改写:用
The very fact of... comes at a bad time for...结构。
你的答案
The very fact of the lawsuti comes at a bad time for Uber has culture problems. 正确写法
The very fact of the lawsuit comes at a bad time for Uber, which is under fire for having a rough-and-tumble culture.批改反馈
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lawsuti拼写错误 →lawsuit- ❌
for Uber has culture problems→for Uber, which is under fire for having a rough-and-tumble culture(两个完整句子不能用空格直接拼接,要用非限制性定语从句which...连接)- ⚠️
culture problems→a rough-and-tumble culture(“企业文化问题”更地道的说法)
为什么
这是典型的 run-on sentence(流水句) 错误:
...comes at a bad time for Uber和Uber has culture problems是两个独立句子,中间没有连词。英文里补充说明 Uber 的状况,要用 非限制性定语从句, which is...,逗号 + which 引导。
背景+总起:…bright spots…
句型模板
A and B have contributed to the problems. But there are some bright spots ...练习 1:中译英
题目
电子产品的广泛使用导致了读书人数的骤降,但也有一些亮点表明改善是可能的。
参考主题词
electronic products, plummeting number, reading books, bright spots, improvements
你的答案
The widespread use of electronic device have contributed to the a slump of the reading number. But there are some bright spots that it's possible to improve this situation.正确写法
The wide range use of electronic products has contributed to the plummeting number of people reading books. But there are some bright spots that suggest that improvements are possible.批改反馈
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electronic device→electronic products(泛指用复数)- ❌
have contributed→has contributed(主语是use单数,谓语用 has)- ❌
the a slump→ 冠词重复,the和a不能同时修饰一个名词- ❌
the reading number→the number of people reading books(“读书人数”要写全)- ⚠️
that it's possible to improve this situation→that suggest that improvements are possible(bright spots后接that suggest...定语从句更顺)
为什么
主语
The widespread use(核心词是use,单数)决定谓语用has,别被后面的of electronic products干扰。the number of...(……的数量)作主语时谓语也用单数。冠词the/a二选一,绝不能叠用。
练习 2:改写
题目
普通句:Bad management caused problems. Some improvements are possible.
改写:用
... have contributed to the problems. But there are some bright spots...结构。
你的答案
Bad management have contivuted to the problem. But there are some bright spots indicate the chance to improve.正确写法
Poor management and some poor choices have contributed to the problems. But there are some bright spots that suggest that improvements are possible.批改反馈
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Bad management have→Poor management has(management不可数名词,谓语用 has;bad→poor更正式)- ❌
contivuted拼写错误 →contributed- ❌
bright spots indicate→bright spots that suggest(缺关系代词that,否则一个句子出现两个谓语are和indicate)- ⚠️
the chance to improve→improvements are possible(更贴合模板)
为什么
there are some bright spots indicate...是典型错误:there are已经占了谓语位置,indicate就成了多余谓语。要把它变成 定语从句bright spots that suggest...,让that在从句里作主语。contribute to(导致/促成)的拼写要记牢。
让步+总起:Precisely how and why…
句型模板
Precisely how and why ... remains an enigma, but ... sheds some light on the matter.练习 1:中译英
题目
父母的陪伴究竟如何以及为什么对孩子有如此关键的影响,仍是一个谜,但以下几点为此提供了一些线索。
参考主题词
parents’ company, crucial effect, children, remains an enigma, shed some light on the matter
你的答案
Precisely how and why parents' company infects children so crucial remains an enigma, but flowing points shed some light on the matter.正确写法
Precisely how and why parents' company has such a crucial effect on children remains an enigma, but the following shed some light on the matter.批改反馈
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infects children→has a crucial effect on children(infect是”感染/传染(疾病)“,不是”影响”;“影响” =affect/have an effect on)- ❌
so crucial位置错 →crucial是形容词,不能直接修饰动词,要改成such a crucial effect- ❌
flowing points→the following(“以下几点” =the following;flowing是”流动的”)
为什么
infect(感染、传染,如病毒感染)vsaffect(影响)——一字之差,意思天差地别。“对……有关键影响”的标准表达是have a crucial effect on...。the following(以下内容)是固定用法,flowing(流动的)完全是另一个词。
练习 2:改写
题目
普通句:We don’t know how AI works. People’s lives changed.
改写:用
Precisely how and why... remains a question, but... sheds some light on the matter.结构。
你的答案
Precisely how and why AI works reamins an enigma, but the fact that peoples's lives changed sheds some light on the matter 正确写法
Precisely how and why advanced technologies are contributing to people's lives remains a question, but people's real changes in their daily lives shed some light on the matter.批改反馈
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reamins拼写错误 →remains- ❌
peoples's→people's(多打了一个s)- ⚠️ 句尾缺句号 → 补上
.- ✅ 句型
Precisely how and why... remains an enigma, but... sheds some light on the matter套用正确
为什么
你的结构是对的,主要是拼写粗心。
people's是所有格(人们的),别再写成peoples's。另外原答案把 “how AI works” 升级成了 “how advanced technologies are contributing to people’s lives”,更贴合考研”科技改变生活”的主题,可以借鉴这个改写思路。
措施:…doing it right should trump…
句型模板
As ..., doing it right should trump doing it fast.练习 1:中译英
题目
随着国家扩大养鱼业,做对比做快更重要。
参考主题词
expand fish farming, doing it right, trump, doing it fast
你的答案
As nation extends the fishery, doing it right should trump doing it fast. 正确写法
As the nation expands fish farming, doing it right should trump doing it fast.批改反馈
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As nation→As the nation(nation前要有冠词the)- ❌
extends the fishery→expands fish farming(“扩大规模”用expand;extend是”延伸/延长”。“养鱼业” =fish farming,fishery偏”渔业/渔场”)- ✅ 后半句
doing it right should trump doing it fast完全正确
为什么
expand(扩大规模、范围)vsextend(延伸长度、时间):扩大产业用expand。fish farming(水产养殖/养鱼业)是固定说法,fishery更多指”渔业整体/渔场”。trump(动词)= 胜过、压倒,很地道的词。
练习 2:改写
题目
普通句:We are building infrastructure to improve people’s health. We should do it well.
改写:用
As we are doing this, doing it right should trump doing it fast.结构。
你的答案
As we are building infrastructure to improve people's health,doing it right should trump doing it right.正确写法
As we are building more infrastructure to improve people's health, doing it right should trump doing it fast.批改反馈
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doing it right should trump doing it right→doing it right should trump doing it fast(笔误:第二个right应为fast,否则变成”做对胜过做对”,意思全没了)- ⚠️
building infrastructure→building more infrastructure(加more更自然)- ⚠️ 逗号后缺空格 →
health, doing
为什么
这个句型的核心对比就是
doing it right(做对/做好)vsdoing it fast(做快),trump(胜过)连接两者。你前半句结构套得很准,只是结尾手滑写重了,写完记得通读一遍检查这种笔误。
观点句:The fact that… speaks to…
句型模板
The fact that + 句子 + speaks to the importance of ...练习 1:中译英
题目
如今越来越多的外国人对我们的传统文化感兴趣,这一事实说明了文化交流的重要性。
参考主题词
foreigners, traditional culture, the fact that, speaks to the importance, cultural communication
你的答案
The fact that more and more foreigner are more intrested in traditional culture speaks to the importance of culture communication(好像有点low了).正确写法
The fact that nowadays more and more foreigners are intrigued by our traditional culture speaks to the importance of cultural communication.批改反馈
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foreigner→foreigners(more and more后接复数)- ❌
intrested拼写错误 →interested- ❌
culture communication→cultural communication(形容词修饰名词:cultural)- ⚠️
are more interested in→are intrigued by(更高级,但interested in也不算错)
关于"好像有点 low 了"
你的问题不是 low,而是 词性错误:
culture(名词)不能直接修饰communication,要用形容词cultural。想升级表达,可以用cultural exchange(文化交流)或cultural communication;“对……感兴趣”除了be interested in,还可以用be intrigued by(被……吸引)更出彩。
练习 2:改写
题目
普通句:Many changes happened because of devices. Advanced technologies are important.
改写:用
The fact that... speaks to the importance of...结构。
你的答案
The fact that many changes happened because of dvices speaks to the importance of advanced technologies.正确写法
The fact that countless changes due to various devices happened in many people's daily life speaks to the importance of advanced technologies.批改反馈
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dvices拼写错误 →devices- ⚠️
many changes happened because of devices→countless changes due to various devices happened in many people's daily life(补出”在人们日常生活中”更具体)- ✅ 句型
The fact that... speaks to the importance of...套用正确
为什么
你的主干结构完全正确,只是内容偏空。
because of可以换成更书面的due to;考研作文里把抽象的 “changes” 落到 “in people’s daily life”(日常生活中)会更有画面感,也更扣题。
让步+观点:Although … may suggest otherwise
句型模板
Although some recent experiences may suggest otherwise, + 完整句子练习 1:中译英
题目
尽管最近的一些经历可能表明相反的情况,大学仍应提供足够的支持来改善学生的身体状况。
参考主题词
recent experiences, suggest otherwise, universities, provide support, physical conditions
你的答案
Although some recent experiences may suggest otherwise, university should provide enough(忘记其他表示足够的单词) supports to improve(这个单词用腻了,想用其他单词了) students physical health. 正确写法
Although some recent experiences may suggest otherwise, universities should provide enough support to improve students' physical conditions.批改反馈
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university→universities(泛指高校用复数)- ❌
supports→support(support作”支持”是不可数名词,不加 s)- ❌
students physical health→students' physical conditions(缺所有格';“身体状况”用physical conditions)
关于"足够的"和"improve 用腻了"
“足够”的同义替换(记 2 个即可):
sufficient(形容词,正式):sufficient supportadequate(形容词,“充足的、够用的”):adequate support“improve”的同义替换:
enhance(增强、提升):enhance students' healthboost(促进、提振):boost physical healthbetter(动词,“改善”):better students' conditions考研作文换词是加分项,但前提是新词词性和搭配要对。
练习 2:改写
题目
普通句:Fishers and scientists need each other. Some experiences suggest they don’t.
改写:用
Although some recent experiences may suggest otherwise, ...结构。
你的答案
Although some recent experiences may suggest otherwise, fishers and scientists need each others.正确写法
Although some recent experiences may suggest otherwise, fishers and scientists need each other in order to succeed.批改反馈
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each others→each other(each other是固定短语”互相”,永远不加 s)- ⚠️ 可补
in order to succeed让句意更完整- ✅ 让步结构
Although some recent experiences may suggest otherwise, ...套用正确
为什么
each other(互相)和one another(互相,三者及以上)都是固定代词短语,没有复数形式。这是很容易想当然加 s 的地方,记住each other雷打不动。
本周高频错误复盘
这五类错误本周反复出现,下周重点盯
&\textbf{1. with 复合结构加谓语}\text{:} \\ &\quad \color{#ff7b72}{\text{With so many parents are...}}\to \color{#7ee787}{\text{With so many parents knowing...}} \\ \\ &\textbf{2. 主谓一致}\text{:主语单复数决定谓语,别被 of 短语干扰} \\ &\quad \color{#ff7b72}{\text{technology are / management have / use...have}} \\ \\ &\textbf{3. 词性误用}\text{:名词不能直接修饰名词,形容词才能} \\ &\quad \color{#ff7b72}{\text{culture communication}}\to\color{#7ee787}{\text{cultural communication}} \\ \\ &\textbf{4. 易混词}\text{:search/research、technique/technology、infect/affect、profit/benefit、extend/expand} \\ \\ &\textbf{5. 拼写}\text{:media、useful、pressure、cities、devices、remains、interested、contributed} \end{align}$$
自查口诀
写完一句,按这个顺序过一遍:谓语单复数对不对 → 有没有多余谓语(with/there be 后)→ 修饰语词性对不对 → 名词单复数和所有格 → 拼写。
使用建议
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先写后看:自己写完一句,再翻回主笔记对照差距。
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不要背答案:重点是把句型结构套进不同主题。
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主动换主题:同一个句型,用考研真题的另外一幅图再练一遍。
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标记错误:写完后自查主谓一致、成分是否完整、that/what/how 是否用对。
纠正格式示例
后续反馈会按这个格式给出
- 你的答案:原样贴回,错误处用 红色 标出。
- 批改反馈:用
> [!danger]列出错误和正确写法。- 正确写法:用代码块给出完整句子。
- 为什么/困惑:用
> [!hint] 或> [!quote] > [!warning]解释语法或搭配原因。